My Special Friend, hope you understand
life is so easy, when you hold my hand
the world is beautiful, when you hug me deep
you fill my dreams, when I go to sleep
I think of our time all night and day
for your happiness, to the god I pray
he gave me YOU, to the god I thank
you are my precious, my luck bank
I still remember the nights we talked
the first day we met, the walks we walked
the coffee, the pizza, the road trip we had
you looked so stunning when you wore that RED
Your chocolate always reminds me of you
I hope my teddy always smiles to you
I see no light, I hear no sound
everything else fades, when you are around
Your charming eyes, your velvet hair,
your gentle touch, your affection and care
they made my moments, they made my year
I wanna be with my angel, always close and near
All I want is my cheerful empty
who gets everything she wants, in plenty
to the world I shout, cut and dry
I will kill anyone, who will make you cry
11 comments:
it reminds me of someone , keep writing such stuff !!!
Cheers
Shashank
thanks shashank.. I will !!
Wow....U presented ur emotions beautifully wid Words
Thank you abhinav... its always good to hear from veterans
Bahut acche... too good... precise writing with known unknown facts.. ;)
Heart felt expressions from an amateur aashiq.. wonder why "empty" could not be replaced with sweetie, lady, baby or something... only the poet can tell.. Good Luck!!
@anonymous1 : thank you .. m glad u liked.. m sure
all facts must be known to people who would have ever tried their hand at the thing talked about :)
@anonymous2 : u have caught a nerve here .. empty here means the literal sense of the place being blank. It has been done deliberately. Its open for anyone to fill the name of their beloved here.. well thanks for your wishes : from this amateur aashiq :)
I have always been a fan.. and you have written this one after a long time.. really well expressed.. I am ready to talk more about it whenever you want to.. :)
@sachin : sirji I wrote it months ago.. but blogged it last month only.. sure we will have a discussion and I hope I will have more to add to this imaginary expedition from your inputs. :)
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